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Overcoming obstacles has always been a part of my life, and due to the valuable experiences that I have had, I know that I have prepared myself well for that task and the responsibilities that await me. Having learned independence at a young age and having had my share of financial hardships, I strongly believe in the critical role that education plays in society nowadays. I recognize the importance of proper college education in the realization of my career goals and this is why I am applying for an undergraduate course on finance at ________ College. This institution has always been known for its excellent reputation, and with its standard of excellence I know I am making the right choice.
I. Introduction
A. Opening paragraph on overcoming obstacles
B. Explain how life challenges have contributed to my improved sense of responsibility
C. Explain the importance of proper college education in order to realize my career goals
D. Choosing an institution known for reputability and high standards
II. Scholastic Background
A. Had been unable to afford money for education in Nepal
i. Due to poverty, parents were uneducated and unable to find work
ii. Lack of financial resources for food, clothing, and medical treatments
iii. My parents went to China from Nepal for education, with my dad on scholarship
B. Finally able to attend and finish formal high school studies
i. My parents were able to find work in China after father finished education on scholarship
ii. I finally finished high school studies
C. Passed every exam in school in Nepal
D. Average percentage per year but has the potential to achieve more, if provided with a scholarship
E. Able to balance academic life with sports
F. Participated in extra-curricular activities
III. Application to _______ College
A. _____ College is a reputable institution, and I believe that this will help me find a stable job in the future
B. Location is also an important factor and with ____College located in Brisbane, where there are lots of job opportunities, I will be able to work and study at the same time
C. I also have many friends and cousins based in Brisbane, so it would still feel like home
D. With the high reputation, excellent location, and good weather of Brisbane, ____ College is an excellent institution of choice
